I have, however, one major complaint. First, this update should have come with a spoiler warning. I now know something about Grave Peril I really wish I didn’t.

Second, in the same vein, I wish the examples were less Harry-centric. If you don’t know the novels, it feels like you truly need to read them to understand the ideas presented, and it gives Harry a stellar approach ( a la Vampire) that I’m not very fond of.

Both examples could be written in a more neutral tone, or, even better, not taken from the novels at all. Someone who has already read them don’t necessarily need the explanation. Those that haven’t will be both spoilered and confounded.

What I truly love about the piece is the hint of all the systems you’re implementing for the game. It feels way more solid than SotC, while still remaining FATE. I truly can’t wait to try it out.